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Author’s Notes: Complete and utter SasuNaru sap follows. You've been warned.




SasuNaru

You are the day
hair kissed by sunlight
eyes dipped in the sky
your flesh the color of freshly turned earth.

You are my day,
the light of my dark world.


You are my night
ano, your hair - dyed by the twilight
and eyes of jagged obsidian
with skin bleached by moonlight.

You are my saving grace,
my tranquil night.



· - · OWARI · - ·


Eh gads that was horrible. Sorry but I have a real problem thinking of writing poetry from Naruto's point of view. Its not that I think he's dumb, its just hard to imagine what he would say or do. I think this fell apart in the second part, badly.

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